Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

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the past few years, due to global warming, we have seen sudden changes in the climate of the

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have become one of the most serious

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and an alarming situation for the world.

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the major causes of global warming and discuss the measures that could be taken to solve the rising matter. The major cause of

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climate

changes is due to human activities

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as deforestation and increased number of transportation. These things produce pollution resulting in having different gasses in the atmosphere causes the temperature to rise. The glaciers are melting day by day

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is increasing sea level and triggers floods, heavy rainfalls and other extreme conditions of the weather.

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, Every country is now becoming advanced and having many industries and factories. They are

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spreading pollution in the

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in the air and dumping waste in the sea are the way others way if destroying the ozone layer and have consequences of global warming. Without a doubt, there are some solutions that the government and every individual should take in order to prevent and put to an end to

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problem.

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government

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the government

should organize campaigns and programs that would provide the awareness of recycling so that we could save our planet to some extent.

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, stop deforestation plant more and more trees, make each of the country green and clean that would help in decreasing the ratio of harmful gases from the atmosphere.

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, consumption of the fuel could be controlled by using public transports rather than using their own cars for transportation purpose. To conclude overall, global warming is very threatening problem that needs to be solved on the priority.

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is the responsibility of mankind to reduce the acts that are affecting our planet so that we could save our world from global warming. Sent from my iPhone

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Topic Vocabulary:

global warming
environmental degradation
climate change
greenhouse effect
carbon dioxide
methane
emissions
fossil fuels
deforestation
industrialization
livestock farming
population growth
waste management
volcanic eruptions
polar ice caps

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Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE IMMIGRATING TO DEVELOPED WORLD. DISCUSS ITS REASONS AND STATE ITS CONSEQUENCES

Television is dangerous because it destroy family life and sense of community; arrested of visiting people or talking with our family we just watched television

Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?