Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays the popularity of shopping online is growing rapidly. Shopping online has more advantages and a few disadvantages.

This

essay shows that how advantages of online shopping supersede the disadvantages of shopping online and

also

my personal experiences about using

internet

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the internet

to buy things. We can buy almost everything by just staying at home and even the prices of most of the products are lower than in the market and it is

also

time saving. We just have to search for the product we want to buy and have to give our address. Mostly we have payment on delivery

options but

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options, but

sometimes we

also

have to pay via credit card. Is not it great that we did not have to go anywhere and we are going to get the stuff we needed. It will not just only save

our

things belonging to us

ours

but

also

the money we have to

spent

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spend

on fares or gas of our vehicle. With all these benefits online shopping still

have

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has

some disadvantages. People get fraud a lot by shopping online. They order one thing and they get something else.

Although

it is not always, getting more popular every day.

However with

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However, with

every passing online shopping is getting more secure and free of frauds.

Still some

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Still, some

people do not prefer to buy online as they want to see the product live and want to feel it with their

otherwise

they do not know what to buy. Mostly it is the case with wearable products

such

as clothes and shoes. With all these pros and cons I think that online shopping is

great method

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a great method

of shopping and I know sometimes we do not get

satisfied but

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satisfied, but

most of the times it is a great way to shop.

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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