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I have magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of Information Network and Security Agency. He has completed his five years of study in

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I have
magnificent pleasure
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the magnificent pleasure
 in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr.
Yirgalem
 Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of
Information Network
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an Information Network
 and Security Agency. He has completed his five years of
study
 in Information Technology (Engineering) successfully. I know him since he was a
first
-year an undergraduate student. During his stay, he has studied Programming in C course handled by me. He has performed excellently in the course, which testifies to his understanding of the fundamentals of Information Technology. During his
study he
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study, he
 has shown keen interest and commitment in the learning process and has completed all assignments.
In addition
 to his excellent performance in the courses, I had more chances to learn his intelligence closely, as an advisor and
guider
someone whose occupation is to apply an overlay of gold or gilt
gilder
guilder
, in his final year project “Network Administrator Tool” in which he was
the good
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the better
the best
 team leader and scored excellent mark.
As a result
 of his academic achievements, he became the
first
-rate scorer of our department with a score of 3.55 on a scale of 4.0. Mr.
Yirgalem
 is
also
 an extremely personable young man with good leadership skills. He had participated in so many extracurricular activities in our university that appraises his leadership capacity and potential. He had worked as a member of the MU-MIT peace forum. His zeal to continue his
further
study
 and excel in the areas of computer science is
also
 highly appreciable.
Hence
, I am confident that he will be very much suitable for undergoing his higher
study
 in your renowned institution. I believe that not only would he be able to make rewarding use of his stay at your institution, but there is
also
 a lot that he might be contributing based on his excellent portfolio. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need extra information.
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