Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language

Moving to a country where the prevailing

language

differs from one’s native can

cause

significant issues with adapting to

society

as well as misunderstanding on a daily basis. I strongly agree that a number of problems may arise due to

language

barrier.

Firstly

this

essay will discuss psychological aspects and an outcome of isolation from

society

, and

secondly

, it will

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

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an inability to understand and correspond to simple instructions which may lead to more serious consequences. The primary reason why I agree with the idea that the lack of knowledge of the commonly spoken

language

may lead to societal

disbalance

is that the acceptance of the individual by

society

plays a crucial role in self-assurance and in basic need for communication in the life of every human being.

Therefore

, a person who is not being involved in the interactive process of communication is more likely to feel lonely and vulnerable as well as experience more stress and inability to share his/her negative thoughts with, at least, someone.

For instance

, according to recent research conducted in one of the small cities in

USA

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the USA

close to

border

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the border

with Mexico figured out that immigrant who were able to speak both languages: Spanish and English were less likely to commit suicide rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

those who could only speak their mother tongue. Another point to consider is that people who are unable to speak and understand

language

of the country where they stay may

cause

issues with fulfilling instructions or recommendations of the authorities.

As a result

such

a misunderstanding might

cause

an opportunity to fool or be unfair with the foreigner by the local population. As an example of

such

a situation I can think of a time when the maintenance company of the house where I am a tenant posted an announcement in Turkish stating that the monthly payment has been reduced from 2,700 Turkish Liras to 2,500 Turkish Liras. When I visited office to pay monthly rent, no one has ever mentioned a decrease in payment and charged me with the amount of 2,700 Turkish Liras.

Thus

, because of my inability to understand Turkish

language

, I was deceived and lost the money I could save. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that residing in a country where the majority of the population speaks another

language

can provoke not only challenges with assimilations in

society

, but may

also

cause

troubles

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trouble

in a daily life constantly.

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

Computers and AI technology are increasingly used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development? (VMN)

In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

Some countries have age 4 as a minimum requirement for admission into schools, whereas other countries believe that age 7 should be the minimum requirement. What is the situation in your country? What do you think is the right age to enter schooling?