Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays
praents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
prefer to send their children to private schools and pay hefty amount of money as
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fees.
but
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But
, to compensate for
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this should
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this, should
they pay taxes or not
this
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is
matter
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a matter
of conflict. I strongly disagree
to
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with
on
this
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point of waiving off tax for parents who are sending their children in private schools.
children
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Children
enrolled in private
schoold
an educational institution
schools
would be having better exposure to latest technologies, but public schools would only be sufficient to provide
basis
(usually plural) a necessary commodity for which demand is constant
basic
education.
For instance
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, private schools use virtual methods for teaching and children have exposure to
lastest
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
technologies like
ipads
a number of sheets of paper fastened together along one edge
pads
iPod
. In my other viewpoint, its not only education that makes students great,
its
it is
it's
also
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qulaity
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
quality
of teachers who are employed by schools.
we
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We
all know, everything good thing comes with a price and to hire good teachers
govt
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
got
need money and to
reatain
hold back within
retain
return
them as well.
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In
n pen
down sayin
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down, saying
g that irrespective of type of schooling, every parent should pay
ta
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taxes
x because
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is required to have great teachers and build infrastructure

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Inequality
  • Socio-economic groups
  • Public good
  • Well-educated population
  • Double payment argument
  • Tax base
  • Infrastructure
  • Qualified teachers
  • Choice and privilege
  • Tax credits
  • Deductions
  • Exempting
  • Public education
  • Funding
  • Resources
  • Collective responsibility
  • Educational quality
  • Directly benefit
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