The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates data about, how many
incidents
and
injuries
were recorded per 100 million passengers who travelled by five different means of transportation in the year 2002.
Overall
, Demand Response contributed
for
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to
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the highest number of
incidents
and
injuries
,
while
Commuter
rail
recorded very low accidents and wounds. In Detail, as regards Demand Response, there were over 250
incidents
recorded, which is
highest
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the highest
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among all other transportation systems. It
also
accounted for nearly 175
injuries
,
this
figure is
also
the highest among other means. Both Light
rail
and Bus
responsible
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are responsible
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for almost 75 accidents each, but the
injuries
recorded by the Bus
incidents
are double the value of Light
rail
. Heavy
rail
mishaps accounted for 50,
while
the number of
injuries
is nearly
same
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the same
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as that of Light
rail
with just under 50. The lowest
incidents
and
injuries
of all the transportation types are recorded by Commuter
rail
with just under 25 mishaps and wounds respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents, injuries, rail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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