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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

#job #demands #stress #sense #commitment #people #work #tasks #health #support #point
In
this
 fast and
competitve
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
world peple
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world, people
world people
 are
continuosly
at every point
continuously
continually
 trying to prove
temselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 in
orer
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to be
succuesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
. In
this
 race, people stress themselves because of the high job
demand which
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demand, which
 eventually lead to increase in stress
.
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.
 In order to prove
themslves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 people go to
office
 even when they are sick.
in
Suggestion
In
 my
opininon it
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opinion, it
opinion it
 is not necessary for people
t
in the direction of
to
 go to
office
wen
at what time? "When are you coming home?"
when
 they are sick and they should be given proper rest and care so that they can resume back to
work
.
in
Suggestion
In
this
 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will tell the
neccesity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
 of people to take rest when they are sick.
prevention
Suggestion
Prevention
 is better than cure. As an example, for a normal
person
 a job will be done in 2 hours might
last
 up to 4 hours for
sick
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sick persons
the sick person
sick people
a sick person
person
.
Sick
Suggestion
A sick person
Sick people
The sick person
person
 might even get a disease if he/she try to
work
 so much because energy is running very fast. If we don’t dare to take a
leave
 for a few days or a week, there might be a situation to take a
leave
 up
to
being one more than one
two
 months to cure diseases
.
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.
 Illness or Sickness is
natural thing
Suggestion
a natural thing
 and I believe no one won’t blame you if you aren’t
finish
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finished
 your tasks in time.
going
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Going
 to
office
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the office
 when we have
fu
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the flu
flu
four
 or
sickeness
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
sickness
thickness
 will affect other people and they
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 will become sick.
this
Suggestion
This
 way the overall
work
 process of the
office
 will be affected.
in
Suggestion
In
 my
office
 my
colegue
an associate that one works with
colleague
colleagues
college
 had fever and cough and when she came to
office
 another
collegeue
an associate that one works with
colleague
 got infected and both of them could n t do their
work
 properly.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 its best advised for a sick
person
 to stay at home. We must take a
leave
 for a while from job to relax our body and
mind
. If we take enough
break
Suggestion
breaks
 to recover from illness, our body and
mind
 will be fresh and there are so many innovative ideas might come up to fresh
mind
. Jobs, responsibilities, commitments are important meanwhile our
mind
 and body are equally important to be
take
Suggestion
taken
cared
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care
 off. Please don’t forget to take a
leave
 when
you
of you or yourself
your
 sick.
health
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
 is more
importatnat
of great significance or value
important
 than everything.
without
Suggestion
Without
 good
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
its
the thing named or in question
it
 difficult to
concentarate
make denser, stronger, or purer
concentrate
inwork
Suggestion
on work
in work
at work
.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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