High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
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competitve
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
world peple
are Accept comma addition
world, people
world people
continuosly
trying to prove at every point
continuously
continually
temselves
in reflexive form of "them"
themselves
orer
to be (often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
succuesful
. In having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
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demand, which
.
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.
themslves
people go to reflexive form of "them"
themselves
office
even when they are sick. Use synonyms
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my Suggestion
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opininon it
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they are sick and they should be given proper rest and care so that they can resume back to at what time? "When are you coming home?"
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will tell the refers to the speaker or writer
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neccesity
of people to take rest when they are sick.
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
prevention
is better than cure.
As an example, for a normal Suggestion
Prevention
person
a job will be done in 2 hours might Use synonyms
last
up to 4 hours for Linking Words
sick
Suggestion
sick persons
the sick person
sick people
a sick person
person
. Use synonyms
Sick
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A sick person
Sick people
The sick person
person
might even get a disease if he/she try to Use synonyms
work
so much because energy is running very fast. If we don’t dare to take a Use synonyms
leave
for a few days or a week, there might be a situation to take a Use synonyms
leave
up Use synonyms
to
months to cure diseasesbeing one more than one
two
.
Illness or Sickness is Accept space
.
natural thing
and I believe no one won’t blame you if you aren’t Suggestion
a natural thing
finish
your tasks in time.
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finished
going
to Suggestion
Going
Use synonyms
office
when we have Suggestion
the office
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or Suggestion
the flu
flu
four
sickeness
will affect other people and they impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
sickness
thickness
to
will become sick. to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
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way the overall Suggestion
This
work
process of the Use synonyms
office
will be affected. Use synonyms
in
my Suggestion
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my Use synonyms
colegue
had fever and cough and when she came to an associate that one works with
colleague
colleagues
college
office
another Use synonyms
collegeue
got infected and both of them could n t do their an associate that one works with
colleague
work
properly. Use synonyms
so
its best advised for a sick to a very great extent or degree
So
person
to stay at home.
We must take a Use synonyms
leave
for a while from job to relax our body and Use synonyms
mind
. If we take enough Use synonyms
break
to recover from illness, our body and Suggestion
breaks
mind
will be fresh and there are so many innovative ideas might come up to fresh Use synonyms
mind
. Jobs, responsibilities, commitments are important meanwhile our Use synonyms
mind
and body are equally important to be Use synonyms
take
Suggestion
taken
cared
off. Please don’t forget to take a Suggestion
care
leave
when Use synonyms
you
sick. of you or yourself
your
health
is more a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
importatnat
than everything. of great significance or value
important
without
good Suggestion
Without
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
its
difficult to the thing named or in question
it
concentarate
make denser, stronger, or purer
concentrate
inwork
.Suggestion
on work
in work
at work
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