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Some people says that, history is one of the most important school subject. other people think, in todays world, subject like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion

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Two
school
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schools
 of thought are found where one group argued about the importance of
history
 as
most important subject whereas
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the most important subject, whereas
the most important subject whereas
last school
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the last school
 of thought comprises of
science
 and technology being
most important one
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the more important one
more important one
 than other subject like
history
.
History
 enables us to know about the past and culture around all over the world which facilitates to
broadened
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broaden
 our mind and knowledge.
For example
; when a student learn about the past
history
 of ‘Baro Bhuiyan’(Twelve kings) of Bengal
,
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,
 they will certainly be interested to preserve the past
history
 and present them in broader audience.
This
 will not only improves the
self-respect but
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self-respect, but
also
 helps them to be curious about other’s
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
history
as a
result they
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result, they
 will be more respectful about others culture and
history
.
On the other hand
, in current ages,
science
 and technology have an obvious impact towards society.
For example
; if the student
only learn
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only learns
history
 or
this
 subject were given too much importance over
science
, they will fail to cope up with the modern world and their job opportunity will be shrunken. Current modern days
demands
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demand
 more scientific innovation and tech related research and
,
Accept space
,
 if we fail to supply enough graduate, the whole
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
 will be hollow. So being, advocating for
science
, I would say,
ofcourse
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of course
, people need to learn about
history
 and there should be
minimum mandatory
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a minimum mandatory history course
history
 course
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 enlightened about
past
Suggestion
the past
 but we should give more focus on
science
 and technology.
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