This is Yirgalem Gidey Gebru, an Ethiopian citizen honored a BSc. degree in Information Technology (Engineering) from Mekelle University – Mekelle Institute of Technology (MU-MIT), which is Ethiopian center of excellence institute where ‘Talents meet challenges’

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is Yirgalem Gidey Gebru, an Ethiopian citizen
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a BSc.
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in Information Technology (Engineering) from Mekelle University – Mekelle Institute of Technology (MU-MIT), which is
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an Ethiopian centre
Ethiopian centre
of excellence institute where ‘Talents meet
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the challenges
’. I came from a family of traditional farmers in a remote part of northern Ethiopia, central Tigray, where farming literally means a long day’s hard
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just to make ends meet. I was one of the lucky ones to attend school at an early age. Fully aware that a better life for my family is resting on my shoulders, I became an outstanding student winning all possible awards while being recognized the
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-rate by the time I completed high school. I am writing
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letter to express my keen interest to pursue
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degree in your prestigious university. Since I have a strong academic record in Information Technology, I believe that
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,
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Information, and
Cyber Security perfectly (PICS) suits my profile and career. Until recently, I have been working as an Exploit Tool Researcher in a cyber security
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division governmental organization called the Information Network Security Agency (INSA), Ethiopia that enabled me to obtain an extraordinary skill
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with malicious file’s analysis, design, configuration, implementation, and overall malware
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software applications. I have
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taken additional trainings in malware reverse engineering, vulnerability
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and certified ethical hacker. Working in
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giant company provided me a wonderful
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in multi-disciplinary tasks, several vendor products, systems, and technologies.
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, I have an impressive
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in
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and
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organizations for three years in the Cyber Security and related fields.
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Cyber Security (PICS). The
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one is my profession. As a highly motivated undergraduate, I have gained a great distinctive result, hands-on knowledge in different cyber security
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areas and skills. My undergraduate study was a breakthrough academic achievement of my early childhood dream and professional career where I gained a remarkable theoretical knowledge accompanied
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experiments, course projects, mini and final projects which build my academic and
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, I developed some of the high-end projects part of my undergraduate
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study, including
: Network Administrator tool using
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socket programming and Centralized Patient Prescription History using PHP. During these periods I realized that there is enough scope for
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in Cyber Security. So, I want to make some contributions in the implementation and enhancement towards
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field in my country. I need to strive more to acquire good skills over it. I believe that your University would be able to help me to enhance more of these skills if I will be given a chance to study there. The courses I took during my undergraduate program in Information Technology (Engineering) and, the researches I have conducted during my academic and as an employee together with the industry
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I gained in the areas of Exploit Tool
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, made a flawless match with the masters program in
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, Information and Cyber Security
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PICS) areas of my interest. My passion how things
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together with the academic achievements and industry
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I gained made me to be passionate about pursuing my master's program in
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, Information and Cyber Security. It is
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for ambitious Information Technology scientists keep themselves up to date with the latest technologies and to make innovations.
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fact, all
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on my master’s
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in
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hot
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of Cyber Security. To achieve my goal, I preferred Skövde University primarily as it dedicates itself as a source of new scientific innovations which are globally significant with local relevance.
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, it provides all-inclusive academic grounding to scientists and engineers, enabling them to involve in joint multidisciplinary understanding and
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development
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of complex and dynamic systems to achieve innovation and economic growth, especially in the emerging and significant
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of Cyber Security to realize the long-lasting contribution to the society.
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, yet importantly, Sweden provides opportunities for students from many nations around the world, with diverse cultures and ideas that will provide me a wonderful
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. Sweden has been always my choice due to many reasons, among which some of them include: a country that was the high quality and world-class educational institutions with hundreds of years of international reputation, multicultural society with all religions and faiths open to new traditions and cultures which is a great opportunity for me as an international student. Sweden has a lot of history to explore, rich in culture, with the English language spoken all over the world.
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, I have attended all my undergraduate studies in English which will be comfortable to do my master’s
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in Sweden. Thankfully, Sweden is going to fully fund
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prestigious master’s
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opportunity. I wish to delve deeper into the subjects to be able to carry out independent
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and analysis or serve in a
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institution. My long-term goal is to become an expert in Cyber Security and to aid the
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internationally and my home country where it is a demanding
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on. I believe that the academic and
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background together with the huge industry
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has a solid foundation. Through the world-class
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and innovation of Skövde University, I am confident that I will develop expertise and boost the quality of my
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potential. I understand that the admission process into your University is very competitive, but I am
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confident that I will satisfy all your requirements and I am eager to join and meet all the challenges and learn more in your prestigious University. I would be most grateful if you could give a chance to my application with your most
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consideration. Your time and consideration are greatly appreciated. I look forward to talking with you soon. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru

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