Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Mobile has become an integral part of daily life. Whether, the
use
of
this
gadget is viable for the children has been the topic of debate
from
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for
a long time. Some parents are in the
favor
promote over another
favour
of the
use
of mobile phones for the children while others are against it.
This
essay will
putforth
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put forth
both the aspects in detail along with a personal view on it. In
this
emerging era of technology, mobile phones
has gained
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have gained
tremendous advantage which has a lot of
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
impact on the learnings of children. As rightly said, "Visual memories are the strongest memories", children learn through videos and animation available in the mobile through internet, which really improves their grasping power.
For instance
, an
android
an open-source operating system used for smartphones and tablet computers
Android
application named "BYJU'S - the learning app", broadcast videos that are
great source
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a great source
of learning in a creative way with its
apllications
the act of bringing something to bear; using it for a particular purpose
applications
application
implications
. Mobile phones can
also
be used to monitor children's location and can be put to the best
use
when
a
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
they are in
emergency situation
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an emergency situation
emergency situations
.
This
has been a major problem in a country like India. Recently, a child was tracked down with the location of his mobile phone and was rescued from the local goons.
Therefore
, the
use
of mobile by the children offers impeccable
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
professionally as well as socially. Advancement in the technology always has downside associated
to
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with
it. Children with mobile phones
often gets
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often get
exposed on internet to porn sites and other irrelevant information which is of no
use
to them. In fact, it spoils the thinking of a child. Many children get addicted to games, which
inturn
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in turn
may lead to depression and mental stress. They cultivate rigid behaviour and even don't obey their parents. According to a news published in Times of India, a student who played "Blue Whale", committed a suicide, as the
last
stage of the game was demanding it. The point is the mind of the children are so obsessed with playing games in the mobile phone that they don't realize the difference
betweenthe
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between the
real and a virtual zone. So, mobile phones
use
prove
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proven
to be disastrous with
this
loopholes
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loophole
. To put it in a nutshell, Mobiles are the current ways to simplify things for the children, but it
also
comes with the exposure of children to bad things. In my opinion, an age bar for the children should be decided for the
use
of mobile phones and parents should monitor the activities carried by the children on the mobile. So,
this
assures effective risk free
use
of the gadget phones.

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