These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In the present era, people prefer home-based
work
due to the availability of modern technology. In
this
essay, I will argue that
this
advancement has more negative impacts than positive. One advantage of
job
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the job
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of
the place of residence is the freedom it provides. Workers have more control
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of
time and they can comfortably organise their job activity around their home life as they can stop or start
work
whenever they want.
For example
, if they have children, they can easily take them and pick them up from school.
In addition
, they can easily undertake any other task related to their personal life, like emergency in
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the family
or shopping. Overall by highlighting the merits, I conclude that people can independently do their job-related
work
as well as their personal chores
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of
managing time on their own. Despite these positive factors, there
are
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is
a plethora of the disadvantages, in which
first
and foremost is loneliness. When people are at
work
, they are always surrounded by others, but
at
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in
his own area, an employee is likely to be all alone most of the time and unable to establish a social circle to relax himself from his
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robot
life.
This
may lead to feelings of sadness and lonesomeness, which
further
tends to develop stress and depression. Another drawback is the fact that one may have less influence in the company. It is often the case that if unforeseen situation or important decisions arise on any unexpected issues in
company
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the company
, if an employee is not there, others may have to step in. If
this
occurs on a regular basis, the contribution of
employee
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the employee
employees
an employee
, may decline, resulting a higher probability of not getting promoted. On the whole,
although
there are both merits and demerits of job running from home with the use of enhanced technology, I must conclude that there are more negative impacts.
Therefore
, employees should consider carefully whether working from his living area is the best choice or not.
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