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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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What is the significance of adapting
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 of the tourist destination? Several supporters argue to learn new customs and traditions;
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, others think that it is not practical due to many reasons. In my opinion, I consider the latter’s viewpoint is right. On the one hand, those who instruct to learn a foreign
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 only for the tourism purpose point out that,
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 is the sign of respect towards the host country which eventually result in acceptance from the tourist destination.
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,
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 ensures a better travel experience and acquire information and knowledge related to the local history and
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.
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, in some countries, it is extremely important to follow local customs, if anyone failed to do so, they would face serious punishment.
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,
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 issues and misunderstandings can be completely eliminated by accepting and behaving the way that particular country demands. Despite the above mentioned statements, there are some opponents of the consideration says that, it is absolutely unethical to think that foreign tourists required to accept the local traditions when they visit there.
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 may not be possible in most of the times as there may not be available sufficient amount of resources to learn
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 within a short span of time. Apart from
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,
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 is developed over the time
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 it cannot be accepted for travelling purpose. Many visitors may experience
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 conflicts when the force to accept
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 which is new as well as unknown to them.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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