Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Stress is a common thing among everyone. All have the issue of getting impatient.
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, stress related illness is common nowadays. People
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with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
get stressed. Now
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a young person of either sex
children
are
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struggling with the same issues.
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, we will discuss the main causes of tension among the adults. There are many reasons for getting tensed.
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, we will talk about the workers. As we know the employees are always in pressure regarding the target, projects, ideas, etc.
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the parents are always worried about the
childern
a young person of either sex
children
, household things, fund management,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
,.
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, teenagers and
childern
a young person of either sex
children
are more tensed these days.
Students
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The students
are under pressure because of their homework, projects, mainly exams,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
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, students are scared about their parents because guardians want their child to top the class. With
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burden a child can
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perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
commit
sucide
the act of killing yourself
suicide
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an occurrence of something
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intense
, my
friends
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friend's
sister who is 10
year
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years
old was
consulted
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consulting
by
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with
a
phycologist
a scientist trained in psychology
psychologist
due to depression. The doctor said that she is under depression which is caused by tension and burden.
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say
express in words
tell
anyone not to worry about anything. That doesn'
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make any sense.
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what we should do
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A
person
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can get relaxed by sharing their feelings and worries. If someone
feel
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feels
like heavy they should open up with someone they can.
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, employee
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a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program
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store
street
is all common in all
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workplaces
. All the company should come up with the meditation classes, yoga classes, massage treatment, etc., should be provided.
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, in schools the management should have a counselling team to
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act together or towards others or with others
interact
with students.
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will help the pupils to share their fears. At
anypoint
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any point
of time if anyone
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sees
a
person
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at a low mood or tensed make sure that you are
next
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to him/her to
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a company
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this
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would give
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the feeling that comes when something burdensome is removed or reduced
relief
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person
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the person
people
a person
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refers to the speaker or writer
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would conclude, that whatever the age group, everyone
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is going
through stress.
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have any medicine. Even though, we can'
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bring change in their situation or
problems but
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problems, but
with just a smile or our support can save a
person
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stress-related illnesses
  • rapid pace
  • pressure
  • balance
  • omnipresent
  • information overload
  • disconnect
  • economic uncertainties
  • job insecurity
  • financial stress
  • environmental factors
  • chronic stress
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • mental health
  • support programs
  • physical activity
  • healthy eating habits
  • awareness
  • accessibility
  • counseling
  • stress management
  • community environment
  • reconnect with nature
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