You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Museums and art galleries attract various historical items and unique art to be viewed by the public.
This
attracts many visitors and the organization in charge make the decision as to whether there is a necessity for an entry fee or to allow free
admission
.
This
essay will discuss the cons and pros of
such
admission
fees and
also
will completely agree that the advantages
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
the
disavantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
of these
admission
fees. These places give an individual an insight into the past of the specific country.
This
is an essential part of the country’s culture and history.
Thus
, an entry fee will prevent certain
people especially
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people, especially
those from the poorest class to enjoy the pleasures of
this
sight
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
site
.
For example
:
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:
- Even a person with the lowest income will get the chance to see the unfathomable beauty of the pictures and understand the history of the country didn’t charge any money.
However
, the funding needed to maintain the building of a museum or the
processn
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process and
process n
to present the
potriats
a word picture of a person's appearance and character
portraits
are very expensive and require sources of funds.The historical remnants and the arts are very fragile
anad
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an ad
easily
destrutable
easily destroyed
destructible
increasing the chance for it to be damaged.
For example
;
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- The museum in Galle, Sri Lanka faced a major problem when the armour of the famous king Dharamathna started to erode as the museum wasn’t being supported by the government as an income. Another advantage of charging a reasonable fee will allow the facility to improve its standards and renovate.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it's
Therefore it's
vital to charge the
vistiors
someone who visits
visitors
a sum of money in order to reach higher by better providing better facilities.
This
will not only maintain the building as a
whole but
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whole, but
also
enhances the improvement of these places. Even though there is always a
dilemea
state of uncertainty or perplexity especially as requiring a choice between equally unfavorable options
dilemma
whether or not the
admission
fees for these places is important.It is clearly seen that the advantages of charging money are far greater than the disadvantages as helps to maintain the assets and improve the
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
without hunting for funds.
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