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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

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Nowadays a growing number of people are shifting to urban regions of the country by leaving their villages and farmland for better work and life.
This
 trend causes a decrease in agricultural productivity as well as generate more urban problems due to increased population.
This
 essay will look at the issues of
this
 trend and propose some remedial measures.
To begin
 with, the main demerits of urban migration of
people especially
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people, especially
 farmers would lead to a decrease in the cultivation of the various
crop
Suggestion
crops
 which we daily depend as a source of food.
This
 often leads to scarcity of food products and the economy of the nation would reduce enormously.
For example
, the country like India the main source of income is from agriculture. Reduction in vegetarian production
decrease
Suggestion
decreases
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 national earnings. Another issue of moving to the urban region would cause more health problems and traffic congestion due to increased population. There are several remedial measures can take
by
Suggestion
from
 the government and the local banks to keep the farming people to stay back in the countryside.
Firstly
 the government can offer advanced equipment and technologies to reduce work stress and thereby they could motivate people's interest in farming.
Secondly
, the local bank could support the farmers financially. To illustrate, if the bank offer loans and subsidies for the farming
people especially
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people, especially
 for the youngsters they would more inspire to engage in agriculture and find more job opportunities in that respective field. In conclusion, migrations to metro cities for the purpose of employment have nasty consequences in the agricultural field, to tackle
this
 issue the law enforcement agency and regional banks can take a step forward to motivate people to do
farming
Suggestion
farm
 work.

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