Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Air freight is progressively used to transport fruits and vegetables to nations where they cannot be produced or are out of season. The main advantage of trading local vegetation gives us an opportunity to taste different kinds of all-natural crops from across the globe and the main drawback is locals don’t get to eat the best
quality
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as they are exported for good prices. In today’s modern world, the Earth has become a small place with faster means of transportation, by which we can export & import farm products from all over the world in short periods.
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to say that we can taste and get all the nutritional benefits of fruits and vegetables, which are not cultivated locally or out of season by transporting them from all over the world.
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, Mango, which is a seasonal fruit and is not cultivated in Saudi Arabia due to unsuitable climatic conditions is available in local markets all over the year. Despite
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advantage, the main drawback is that most of the best
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of local cultivated vegetation is exported to other countries commercial reasons, where they get good high prices for the crop. The regionally produced fruits & vegetables are categorized into grades based on
quality
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for export purposes and the best
quality
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are exported
in to
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international markets for good prices, making them scarce for locals to
savor
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
savour
the regional crops.
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, we can find the best
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of fruits and vegetables in many other countries rather than in places where they are actually grown. In conclusion,
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fruits & vegetable should be air freighted to places where they can’t be cultivated for the people to get
taste
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a taste
the taste
of non-regional cultivation, but it should
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be considered that not all of them are exported for financial benefits.

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