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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbor moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

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Dear
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 Ali, I hope you and your family are well. I am writing to bring to your notice the problems I have with the new tenant, Alizay, who has moved to the room
next
 to mine. She stays up late at night and plays loud music till midnight.
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, her friends come to stay with her often which makes the situation more disturbing. They play video games with full sound on. Sometimes they sit in the lounge to watch TV late at night.
However
, I have different habits than her. I am an early sleeper as I have to attend my university in the morning. I am unable to concentrate on my studies because of the nuisance. The lack of sleep aggravates the situation for me. Considering the whole scenario, I request you to please shift me to the vacant room downstairs. The girl in the other room downstairs shares the same routine as mine. I want to live in a quieter environment to
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 my purpose of staying here. I will be waiting for your kind response. Give my regards to your family. Yours Sincerely, Areeba Toor
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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