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Prison is the best way of punishment. Give your opinion.

#prison #punishment
Now-a-days, crime rate is increasing at an alarming rate.In order to mitigate
this
 issue, different punishments are given to criminals which act as a deterrent.Some people believe that giving
prison
 sentences
is
Suggestion
are
 the most
effective of punishment
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effective punishment
.
However
, I strongly believe that
this
 is not the right course of action as the prisons are too
lenient most
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lenient, most
 of the time and not entirely necessary in some situations.
Firstly
, the one reason why I do not consider
prison
 as
significant measure
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a significant measure
 for sentences is that these are too comfortable to live in.
For example
, these days, offenders are provided with a large number of luxuries,
such
 as video games and TV
.
Accept space
.
 These things fail to
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
craft
 a learning environment. What I mean by
this
 is that inmates would not be able to understand the severity of their crimes.If government wants to make them not to re-offend
,
Accept space
,
wrong-doers
a person who transgresses moral or civil law
wrongdoers
 need to be charged with serious offences. Another point to consider
prison
 as less beneficial is that it is not required in less serious crimes. Take shoplifters as an example.
Although
 they are arrested after being caught on CCTV camera as same as murderers or rapists, they are not liable to major and longer
prison
 sentences.
Therefore
, they should not be charged with these punishments and ordered to face trial and eventually should not be kept in
same prisons
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the same prisons
 to rub their shoulders with serious culprits. In conclusion, according to some people's assertion, keeping criminals in cells is
important strategy
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an important strategy
 to follow.
However
, I completely
disgree
be of different opinions
disagree
 with
this
 and holds the strong belief that
this
 is not 100 percentage useful and not required in all cases. It is predicted that
government
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the government
 would allocate sentences according to the severity of the crime.

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