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Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student’s level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learners and tell us very little about their actual ability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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Exams have become the cornerstone of our academic curriculum. Some people believe exams are the best way to access a
student
's ability.
However there
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However, there
 are others who believe exams are putting unnecessary pressure on our young learners and its not the right approach to access the potential of a
student
. In
this
eassay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 I will
dicuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
 both sides of the argument and put forth my points supporting the latter. Exams are very important for the academic development of a
student
. A
student
 learns to manage his time and articulate his understanding of a topic through exams.
Also
 a good score in the exam will open up future prospects for a
student
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in terms
 of higher education and well paying jobs.
For example
,
inorder
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in order
 to get admitted to a premium B-school like IIM in India, students today need to score very high
in
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on
 the CAT
accessment
the classification of someone or something with respect to its worth
assessment
.
Although
 exams are very important to evaluate the
theoritical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
 knowledge of a
student
, in a real life scenario its very important to have hands on experience. Exams nowadays have become astronomically competitive and
this
 has put tremendous pressure on students.
For
example it
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example, it
 has been estimated that
percentage
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the percentage
 of
student
sucides
the act of killing yourself
suicides
subsidies
 have gone up by 20% in the
last
 5 years in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
.
This
 data point is a clear indication of how the
competition
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competitive
 nature of
out
of or belonging to us
our
 exams
are affecting
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is affecting
 the students. In conclusion, I believe exams are very
a
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an
 important part of a
student
's life,
However
, a two hour exam should not be the only
yard stick
a measure or standard used for comparison
yardstick
 to access the true potential of a
student
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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