Some people believe that young people should spend their time with family, rather than go to entertainment activities outsides the house. Some disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
This
is one of the common matter discussed among people. The youth Linking Words
prefere
for going out with make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
prepare
friend
and have Suggestion
friends
a friend
fun
with them. They don't find spending Use synonyms
time
with family will give any kind of entertainment. But in the other hand parents want their kids Use synonyms
next
to them always.
The new generation Linking Words
are
more interested to spend Suggestion
is
time
with their friends because they find Use synonyms
thats
more important and Suggestion
that's
fun
. Spending Use synonyms
time
with friends will give them more Use synonyms
plesure
in life. Young people find joy and happiness with their friends. The main point is, a fundamental feeling that is hard to define but that people desire to experience
pleasure
wherther
the aged people can do the same things what they do with their friends? introduces two alternatives
whether
For example
, for parents it not possible to go for Linking Words
bike ride
, have Suggestion
a bike ride
fun
talks, etc. Use synonyms
It
not possible. Suggestion
It's
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
childern
spend a young person of either sex
children
time
with family, they will be some limits. The youth enjoy more with their friends. Use synonyms
Thats
more entertaining.
Suggestion
That's
However
, spend Linking Words
time
with family is Use synonyms
also
great. Sitting with your mom, dad and brother make a great experience. Family is Linking Words
also
equally important and spending Linking Words
time
with them Use synonyms
also
make more Linking Words
fun
. Talking about your old memories and laughing, having food with everyone, going for family function meeting all the relatives Use synonyms
also
make Linking Words
sence
. a general conscious awareness
sense
sitting
and watching comedy (photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
Sitting
moives
in your is the greatest experience what change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
moves
movies
movers
i
had. For refers to the speaker or writer
I
intance
, when an occurrence of something
instance
i
sit refers to the speaker or writer
I
home i
won't get a minute to do anything because my mom, dad and brother will be behind me saying some or other things.Accept comma addition
home, I
home I
Tto
keep their kids with Suggestion
To
Tito
them
parents would crack jokes and of them or themselves
their
its
a great it is
it's
feel
.
To conclude, Suggestion
feeling
i
think both hanging out with friends and family is refers to the speaker or writer
I
equal
Suggestion
equally
fun
. Both have its Use synonyms
on
place. With friends we get to know about belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive
own
world
and Suggestion
the world
people but
with Accept comma addition
people, but
parents we
would come to know about real love.Accept comma addition
parents, we
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