A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There remains a controversy whether animals are not meant to suffer from the

overexploitation

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of human beings and

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treated equally as mankind.

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, some people assert that living creatures are to be served for the manifold wants of

humans

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humans, such

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as source of food or scientific purposes. Personally, I am

in all agreement with

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in agreement with all

in all agree with

in all agree agree with

the former statement for several following reasons. In the

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place, animals reserve the right as humans possess.

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, they are both the creatures living under the same roof, sharing the same natural habitat and atmosphere which

are granted

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have been granted

to all creatures since the beginning of the Earth.

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, it is going against the natural laws if people keep interfering with and abusing the co-existence of animals.

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to

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,

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on animals will probably result in the potential risk that humankind might confront in the near future,

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as famine or, in the worst scenario, even their own extinction due to the loss in biodiversity.

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, it is a reckless belief that animals are the slaves for human’s endless needs.

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, animals are obviously not the sole source of food. Alternatively, people can switch into vegetable-based and wholesome dishes like mushrooms or consume more fresh fruits in order to maintain their health normally.

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, placing animals as investigating samples in

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scientific experiments does not have the

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

outcomes as commonly expected.

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, rats are usually brought into tests in medical trials to determine whether a type of medicine is effective in practical usages.

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, the medicine is likely to work on

rats’ body structure but

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the rats’ body structure, but

the rats’ body structure but

might have reversed or side effects when used on

human body

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the human body

, leading to several severe illnesses because of the undesired consequences of the taken pills. In conclusion, animals are by no means under obligation to meet the human’s unlimited demands.

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, people should change their mind, start to appreciate the indispensable benefits to which animals are

consistenly

in a systematic or consistent manner

consistently

bringing and consider them to have the equivalent rights as owned by mankind.