Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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a kid's life

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as it teaches them healthy competition and they are trained by professionals. It is often said that

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an early stage

the early stage

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of a human being's life

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local newspaper

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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