Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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preceding all others in time or space or degree
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of thoughts is is in
favor
promote over another
favour
of
home
schooling of children and
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others some
disapproves it.
Although
lessons taught at
home
, play as good part in a kid's development,
however in
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however, in
my opinion
school
education has a massive positive impact in
kid's life
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a kid's life
the kid's life
kid's lives
as it teaches them healthy competition and they are trained by professionals. It is often said that
home
is children's
first
kindergarten. On one hand, it is observed that at
early stage
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an early stage
the early stage
of human beings life
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of a human being's life
of human being's life
, they quickly grasp things through observation.
For example
, my six year old niece saw
Pepsi commercial
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a Pepsi commercial
just a couple of times on television and in just
few days
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a few days
, she just started imitating the actor's impression
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front of us.
On the other hand
, most of schools these days are managed by professionals and teachers who are teaching at schools are highly qualified and most of them are trained to teach students. So they know how to teach students of different age, family background and they are experts in their fields. According to
local newspaper
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the local newspaper
of Karachi city, most of the teachers teaching in
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for
in
middle
school
possess a graduation degree in child psychology.
In addition
to it,
school
going kids learns how to compete to win, while participating in sports and other curricular activities.
For example
, during
school
days
,
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,
participating in
school
debate competition could help in improving interpersonal skills and which could often result in boosting confidence of kids from
early age
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an early age
and it could help them cracking job interviews in future
.
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.
The importance of
home
education cannot be neglected
because children as
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as children because
they spend major time of their childhood at
home
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home, however
however
in my opinion the
school
programs are specially designed to teach students from any age group and while studying in
school
, kids develops
competitive spirit
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a competitive spirit
to get better from one another.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning
  • cater
  • flexible schedule
  • extracurricular activities
  • safe learning environment
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • socialization
  • diversity awareness
  • structured environment
  • discipline
  • punctuality
  • resources and facilities
  • communication skills
  • teamwork
  • specialized subjects
  • experts
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