Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think that it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with discuss both options.

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Pets are good friends of children. Some people believe that in homes
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keeping pets are good for their children.
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, others
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feel
that it is unsafe and unsound for them. In
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essay, I will enunciate both and my views in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark with
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some people feel that pets like dogs and cats are beneficial for children and houses. The pets are friends for children in childhood age
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They are
play
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playing
with them. The pets
have teach
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have taught
the children a lot of social skills like sharing responsibility,
faithing
the act of consuming food
feeding
and communication. The pets are not only good for children it
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beneficial for their home and parents. The pets have
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worked
as the security guards
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Animals encourage physical vitality in children. A child with
pet
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a pet
is always active
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chirpy and quick.
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, some people believe that keeping pets at home have dangerous for their children.
Pets
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Bets
spread dangerous diseases, allergies and skin infection so
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
it can effect the children. They have ill.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • companion
  • responsibility
  • care
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • social skills
  • transmit
  • diseases
  • allergies
  • safety risks
  • time
  • effort
  • money
  • mature
  • handle
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