Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative atibe impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

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With the rapid expansion of networking and internet, social media become

pivotal part

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a pivotal part

of everyone's

life

. Some people opine that social sites are detrimental not only for individual person but for

socities

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

societies

also

. I agree

this

virtual world causes more harmful impact rather than benefits. Undoubtedly

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social networking has various positive sides as it helps to increase communication system despite of long distances.

For instance

, my brother lives in china and we can easily communicate with him through online sites, as

it is

it's

able us to not only hear him but

also

we can see him at any time without any

peoblem

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problem

This

brings families together and gives them a chance to meet their loved one's.

Nevertheless

, the drawbacks of these sites far outweigh their benefits.

Firstly

, by excessive usage of these different applications like Facebook, Instagram or what's app can cause isolation within the family.

For example

, in one

home every

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home, every

family member becomes busy on their gadgets rather than spending some quality time with each other. According to

statistics especially

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statistics, especially

youngsters spend

average 15 hours

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an average 15 hours

a day browsing internet.

Furthermore

this

virtual

websites

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website

can bring serious harm

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lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

life

life's

lives

Such

as by putting details of personal

life

and sensitive information publicly can cause kidnapping, blackmailing and unnecessary affiliation with wrong ones, which can eventually put someone in

life

threatening situations.

For example

, a friend of mine was blackmailed by his friend after collecting information which is taken

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from

her social website. In conclusion, social sites have more unfavourable impacts to individual persons and collectively on the whole society.

Such

as by increasing gaps between families and can be responsible of dangerous incidents in anyone's

life

Thu Oct 31 2019

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

275 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

mental health
anxiety
depression
loneliness
face-to-face interaction
interpersonal skills
misinformation
public opinion
addiction
productivity
cyberbullying
emotional distress
privacy concerns
identity theft
data mining
networking opportunities
raising awareness
social issues
curated images
real-life social interaction

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Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative atibe impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

Fully explain your ideas

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

You caused some damage to the kitchen area of your flat. Write a letter to your landlord explaining the following. •How the damage occurred •The extent of damage •What you would like to landlord to do.

Some companies prefer people to work in the office, while others facilitate their employees to work from home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.