The chart below shows the average delay in flight departures (in minutes) at different airports in the USA for five different time periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart reports the amount in
minutes
of flights postponement over more or less 20 years
for different USA cities.
The first thing that we can notice is that from 2001 to 2015 there was a constant diminishing of delay
time in the airports of Dallas and New York, even though the òast is the city were
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where
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of flights
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delay
were recorded in the periods analysed. In fact
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in
2001 to 2005 New York recorded almost 40 Change preposition
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minutes
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average
delay
in the
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This
is the highest postponement reported.
The delays collected in San Francisco has
a tendency to increase from 1996 (less than 10 Correct subject-verb agreement
have
minutes
) to 2010 (more than 20 minutes
), while
in from 2011 to 2015 ther
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deminishment
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diminishment
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average
delay
of flights respect
to the previous 4 years.
From 1996 to 2010 Chicago departure Change preposition
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times decrease steadly
going from over 30 Correct your spelling
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minutes
to a little more than 10.
The reported data demonstrate a decrease of
the total amount of delays in the span Change preposition
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time
recorded.Change preposition
of time
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