The chart below shows the average delay in flight departures (in minutes) at different airports in the USA for five different time periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average delay in flight departures (in minutes) at different airports in the USA for five different time periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart reports the amount in
minutes
of flights postponement over more or less 20 years for different USA cities. The first thing that we can notice is that from 2001 to 2015 there was a constant diminishing of
delay
time in the airports of Dallas and New York, even though the òast is the city
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more
minutes
of
flights
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delay
were recorded in the periods analysed. In
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2001 to 2005 New York recorded almost 40
minutes
of
avarage
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average
delay
in
the
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departures .
This
is the highest postponement reported. The delays collected in San Francisco
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a tendency to increase from 1996 (less than 10
minutes
) to 2010 (more than 20
minutes
),
while
in from 2011 to 2015
ther
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there
was a slight
deminishment
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diminishment
of the
avarage
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average
delay
of flights
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to the previous 4 years. From 1996 to 2010 Chicago departure
delay
times decrease
steadly
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steadily
going from over 30
minutes
to a little more than 10. The reported data demonstrate a decrease
of
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the total amount of delays in the span
time
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of time
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recorded.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, delay with synonyms.
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