The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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the lives

relationships of famous peop

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people, but

e people believe that simp

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the simple life

life

of people who have achieved success in their lives should be reported

instead

. I strongly disagree with

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statement that

life

of ordinary people should be reported more on the media.

To begin

with, publishing lives of the celebrities itself is not a way to boast of what amazing

life

celebrities have yet the media has tend

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tended

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encourage communities through their true stories which are about how they succeeded in their careers from living in underprivileged living conditions to getting experienced in sexual and domestic violence. To exemplify, African American chil

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children, especially

ng girls could be motivated by stor

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the story

the most famous woman, Oprah Winfrey and her

life

story could bring self-confidence, strength, goal to those girls who are suffering from racism.

Second

, the activities of the famous people on t

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media is o

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are

of the positive tools which could advocate communities and appeal other well-known people to contribute to the society for

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ving the issues. Many Hollywood stars take initiative in building up different kinds of foundations whose aims are to tackle the problems

such

as millions of orphans, food malnutrition, environmental issues we face every day.

For instance

, Angelina Joly started her

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nteerism to

tell voluntarily

volunteers

give hands to set up shelters for orphan children in Africa.

However

, there are so many ordinary people that could be role models in the society To sum up, it is clearly that media should present the lives and relationship of celebrities which could positively influence on raising awareness of other people and giving hope to young generations.