The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.

The media f

ocuses

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focus

more on the lives and relationships of famous people. While but some people claim that simple life of people who have achieved success in their lives should be reported

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. I strongly disagree with

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statement.

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with, publishing lives of the celebrities itself is not a way to boast of what amazing life celebrities have yet the media has t

endency

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tended

tendered

to encourage communities through their true stories which are about how they succeeded in their careers from living in underprivileged living conditions to getting experienced in sexual and domestic violence. To exemplify, African American c

hildren especially

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children, especially

young girls could be motivated by s

tory

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the story

of the most famous woman, Oprah Winfrey and her life story could bring self-confidence, strength, goal to those girls who are suffering from racism.

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, the activities of the famous people o

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in

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are

one of the positive tools which could advocate communities and appeal other well-known people to contribute to the society f

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in

solving the issues. Many Hollywood stars take initiative in building up different kinds of foundations whose aims are to tackle the problems

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as millions of orphans, food malnutrition, environmental issues we face every day.

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, Angelina Joly started h

er

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olunteerism

tell voluntarily

volunteers

to give hands to set up shelters for orphan children in Africa.

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, there are so many ordinary people that could be role models in the society To sum up, it is clearly that media should present the lives and relationship of celebrities which could positively influence on raising awareness of other people and giving hope to young generations.