QUESTION There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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In todays world, everyone wants to live in a nuclear family for a better life. It is an ongoing deliberation among people that positive and negative effects on society due to family

size

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Size

. In

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essay we look forward the benefits and drawbacks of undersize family or oversize family groups.

Firstly

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, there are myriad of advantages of smaller family rather than bigger family. Those family members live wealthy because of their size. Parents can provide better education and facilities to their children. They spend their time

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with

children, sit together, play together, eat together etc. Most of the family can plan to go abroad for the vacation,

evey

(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception

every

kid has a dream to spend their holidays in different locations. Small family is always beneficial for their nation and their development

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For instance

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, in Africa families are more

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

larger and they have no work opportunities to earn the money. So they could not provide better education, healthy food and a

wealthy

having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease

healthy

life to their

youngers

used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father

younger

and adults.

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Higher

population always remains a burden on the government shoulder. If everyone has a little family it would be a great effort for

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countries. On the other side, dinky

familly

a social unit living together

family

has

many of disadvantages

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many disadvantages

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. In those

family child

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family, children

family children

has no more siblings, cousins, uncle or other family member, as they could not

learned

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learn

and live with other's experiences. Big families demonstrate the love and unity of the members. All festivals

are celebrate

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are celebrated

are celebrating

at a large scale because of large families. To conclude,

this

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nuclear

families

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family

are

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was

were

the

first

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preference in those days.

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, both family sizing

have the

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have, the

pros and cons.

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It's

all depends upon the person's choice, how they want to live

their

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Their

life.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

285 words

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*QUESTION* There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

Fully explain your ideas

These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

QUESTION There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?