Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.What is the reason for doing this ? IS this a negative or positive development ?

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ages

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, we all are stuck in a rat race where success is only measured quantitatively . No one

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to stay behind in

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competition and our parents are

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trying their best so that we can get a competitive edge over others.

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is empirical that,

while

doing so , they are often putting enormous

pressure

on their adolescents.

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development before drawing a

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logical conclusion . First and Foremost , putting too much

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over students for better

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often troubles the natural development of the kids . Many students fail to handle

this

excessive workload and

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release

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we hear

many

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suicidal news committed by failed students which are nothing but the

consequesnces

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consequences

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of extravagant expectations. Apparently ,

this

tendency is killing the natural intent of each

children

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result

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they fail to grow as an independent individual and

also

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their leadership skills die

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their formative years .

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,

peoples

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people

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who are forced to

take

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make

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decissions

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decisions

just because of the imposed

pressure

,

often

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unable to discover their

interal

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internal

talent and

thus

become easily subjugated by others . Their muteness and less challenging

life style

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make them just

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numb .

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recently

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released article ,

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it

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shows in recent years number of dissatisfied workers

rise

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to

manyfolds

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manifolds

many folds

and experts claim

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happening because of

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lack

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of hazardous upbringing .

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to, that it is

also

observed that

peoples

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are suffering from many health hazards which are just because of the

high

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pressure

seeds our progenitors sowed in our childhood . In a nutshell ,

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disseminating

pressure

situations by imposing

abormal

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abnormal

anticipations on our minors can only bring adverse

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effects

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to the mental and

physcial

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physical

development of our kids . We should

try

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create a friendly environment in our household where kids

are learned

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not only to grow but

also

to be

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perfect and balanced

human

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.