Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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In recent years, there has been a serious issue in the amount of

pollution

rising and the possible reason can be the forms of traffic. Some people believe that adjusting the price of gasoline is the most effective way to address the problems and I think that the number of actions should be taken by the

government

and individuals. To start with, the number of

pollution

problems leads to an adverse effect on the environment which resulted from various forms of transport. People may think the most useful way to reduce

this

problem is increasing the price of petrol.

However

, I completely disagree with

this

idea and firmly believe that there are many strategies that can be

instead

of increasing prices for fuels. One thing the

government

can do

that is

the number of private cars should be banned into the city centre during the peak hours and increasing parking lots' fee in downtown. Another thing they

also

can introduce

that is

improving public transport in order to attract citizens to take it or subsidising the fares on tickets. Apart from several measures are taken by the

government

, I deem that individuals could

also

take responsibility for the aim of solving a wide rage of issues.

Firstly

, people could take public transport

instead

of driving their own cars. A good instance of

this

strategy is that they can choose walking, cycling, or taking subways and bus to and for the destinations.

Secondly

, they could plant a variety of vegetation in the environment, which would reduce the amount of carbon footprint.

Consequently

, the problems of growing traffic and

pollution

would be improved by individuals' behaviours. In conclusion, combing the actions to address the

pollution

and traffic problem is the

government

and individuals' joint responsibility, and if all measures are taken promptly, the issue could be mitigated.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

305 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Discourage
Incentivize
Alternative energy
Public transportation
Lower-income
Carpool
Ride-sharing
Congestion
Urban planning
Pedestrian-friendly
Tax incentives
Electric and hybrid vehicles
Emissions standards
Cleaner vehicles
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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