Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance? What is your opinion? You should write at least 250 words. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

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Computer

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The computer

plays a key role in everyone's life today. Some may believe that computers are merely an obstacle than a help in today's world; While others may completely disagree on the same. In

this

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essay,

refers to the speaker or writer

would

arguee

present reasons and arguments

argue

urge

ague

that

computer

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the computer

is one of the greatest invention which was had made life much easier today.

Person

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A person

The person

who does not like change may certainly have

negative opinion

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negative opinions

a negative opinion

about innovations or new technologies. A primary reason for computers being considered as

hindrance

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a hindrance

is its

continious

continuing in time or space without interruption

continuous

requirement for upgrades.

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, Processors and softwares of computers should be updated periodically to operate at optimum speed and support new applications in the market. Computer without necessary upgrades would

endup

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end up

being a trouble maker and would not support latest applications. On the

otherhand

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other hand

, computers can help people save money, preserve

environment

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the environment

and

percious

characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for

precious

time. Earlier, documents had to be

physicall

in accord with physical laws

physically

physical

printed and stored for future references or

for

being one more than three

four

records. With the help of computers and other accessories, documents are now stored

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hard drives or online portals.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, it provides

option

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the option

of completing their daily or monthly errands from their home or office.

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, paying bills online,

transfering

transfer somebody to a different position or location of work

transferring

money online or making online purchases are indispensable activities now. Using computer documents can be stored for

longer period

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longer periods

a longer period

at lesser

cost and

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cost, and

they can be recovered faster than physical documents if required at a later point of time. Using computer effectively enables

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

save precious time, money and helps prevent

enviromental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

damages.

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essay argues that uses of computers overweigh its limitations and

also

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serves as an essential tool in human's life.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

266 words

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