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Many children these days have their own mobile phones . What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

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The rapid development in the field of technology offers our younger generation the chance to use electronic gadgets like mobile phones and computers very early in their life.
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 it helps them in
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a multitude
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the ill effects are no less. There are many reasons why children should not use mobile phones.
Firstly
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 several harmful effects on the physical health which includes vision problems
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health hazards due to the radiation exposure
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and obesity by the sedentary lifestyle.
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Secondly, by
 using smart phones
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for longer periods, they
 restrict themselves from socializing which in turn create mental problems in their later adulthood.
On the other hand
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the mobile phones can help children in
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a myriad
 of ways.The learning apps which
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 interesting ways of learning subjects aid the students a lot.
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, children who learn using electronic gadgets at a young age can become techno savvy right from their childhood. To conclude
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it is true that
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 phones are helpful to children in many ways if used cautiously and in discipline.

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