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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#year #school #university
The two maps compare the various developments h
append
come to pass
happened
to a
city
 between 1986 and today. Overall, what stands out from the maps is that the
city
 has been more urbanised. Focusing on the east part of the
city
, in the northeast part was farmland in 1986;
however
,
this
 is completely vanished. New roads are laid from the c
enter
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of the
city
 to both east and west side, for a short distance, either s
ides
Suggestion
side
of the roads, where new buildings are erupted. Another road, which laid from north to south, There was a garden can be seen in the c
enter
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of the map, in the beginning time period o
f
Suggestion
on
the map, which is e
xtende
relatively long in duration; tediously protracted
extended
 and replaced. There is a river passing through the
city
 from south to north
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