Hosting international sporting competitions is good.but few people think this causes too many problems. explain both views and tell your opinion.

International sporting
competetions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
competition
computations
becomes
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become
popular nowadays and grasp people's attention especially adults. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is a good thing to have it in your own
country
for several reasons which some will be mentioned in
this
paper.
First
, it would be fun having
such
interesting international events in our place, it would give us many choices to have pleasure time with our friends and families. Brining
this kinds
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this kind
these kinds
of sport that a lot people waiting for is good for the fans of
this
sport,
instead
of travelling out of the
country
to watch it they can attend it at their home. One major reason is economical, by having
such
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
competitions
computation
like that especially if they are really favourable by most people, would benefit the hosting
country
and would be
opened
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open
to other coming events. In my view, it is a great step for the
country
to have international events for all people around the world to come.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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