With the rise of e-book cone the decline in paper books. Some people see this is a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is considered that the soar in electronic books cause the sink in notes. Many of them think that it is
the good
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the best
step for development and few people believe that it is not good.
This
essay describes advantages and disadvantages of using electronic gadgets by considering different factors. Two main important advantages by usage of e-books are saving
ecosystem
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ecosystems
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
and long storage of data.
Firstly
, the paper is manufactured by cutting of wood which leads to deforestation. So, by equipping computers the number of trees
are saved
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is saved
and cause afforestation. Which is good for
environment
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the environment
.
Secondly
, by using paper for writing data cannot be stored for long period and
also
it can be destroyed easily. Whereas, by using electronic
decices
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
we can
retrive
get or find back; recover the use of
retrieve
our data quickly and can be saved for more days.
For instance
, in
modern world
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the modern world
the use of papers
have been decreased
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has been decreased
and computer usage has been
soared
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soaring
.
However
, it
also have
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also has
has also had
disadvantages like eyesight and more coat. Nowadays, many people were using e-book for
purpose
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the purpose
of study. By
addicing
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
addressing
more to devices can cause eye sight. Not only
that it
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that, it
also have
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also has
flaws like the cost. The
prize
the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
price
of computers
are
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is
very
high according
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high, according
to
features
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the features
they have. Example the people who are rich can easily buy it. But the people who
has
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have
poor economic status can’t afford it. To conclude, disadvantages like eye sight and cost can be minimised by taking certain measures. Advantages like saving
environment
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the environment
and retrieving data quickly has more impact. So, it is concluded that by using e-book advantages are overweight by
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
.

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