In some countries university students live away from home and in another cities wile study. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another cities?
In today's global world,
Education
is the most momentous thing in an individual life. Most precious years of our life have been spent in getting Use synonyms
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education
. To reap the benefits of it some students prefer to study in different cities far from Add an article
an education
home
, Use synonyms
while
others get an Linking Words
education
from the neighbourhood. In my Use synonyms
opinion
the advantages of studying away from the family are Add a comma
opinion,
dominating
than its negatives.
In today's Correct quantifier usage
more dominating
fast growing
Add a hyphen
fast-growing
cities
many Add a comma
cities,
skills
for living Use synonyms
needs
to be learned from the present sprouting generation. Correct subject-verb agreement
need
Get
Wrong verb form
Getting
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education
distant from Correct article usage
an education
home
gives Use synonyms
the
opportunity to learn Correct pronoun usage
me the
such
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skills
. Use synonyms
For instance
, money and time management, cooking, cleaning and how all these things can be managed with our daily studies when the responsible Linking Words
person
is Use synonyms
far-away
. Correct your spelling
far away
Such
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skills
in Use synonyms
overall
development. Another important domain for getting an Linking Words
education
near Use synonyms
to
the university is the surrounding atmosphere, which is full of other pupils helps to encourage for to do the hard work. Other than that the opportunities of mixing with people from different Change preposition
apply
background
give the chance to develop maturity and several qualities or Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
skills
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also
can be learned from Linking Words
this
, which leads towards a successful life. Linking Words
However
, living away from Linking Words
home
can be emotionally depressing for some students, Use synonyms
as a consequence
, they are not able to concentrate on study.
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On the other hand
, studying in Linking Words
homeland
can be helpful in saving money Add an article
the homeland
due to
dorms and hostels could be more expensive. Linking Words
Moreover
, older Linking Words
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person
or Fix the agreement mistake
people
caretaker
in Fix the agreement mistake
caretakers
surroundings
can be favouring Correct pronoun usage
their surroundings
while
studying, which helps Linking Words
to
concentrate more on Correct pronoun usage
them to
study
rather than other responsibilities. Wrong verb form
studying
In
Linking Words
contrast
disturbing Add a comma
contrast,
neighbourhood
and siblings can be injurious Fix the agreement mistake
neighbourhoods
while
learning. Linking Words
In addition
, the shadow of a responsible Linking Words
person
in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the surrounding
surrounding
could prevent a Replace the word
surroundings
person
from Use synonyms
self development
and maturity.
To recapitulate, Add a hyphen
self-development
although
the disadvantages Linking Words
such
as emotional breakdown, the advantages of independence and Linking Words
self development
are more significant. Add a hyphen
self-development
According to
the above argument, I can Linking Words
be agreed
that Wrong verb form
agree
advantages
of studying far from Correct article usage
the advantages
home
are overwhelming.Use synonyms
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Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example