Many countries have now banned smoking in public places. Some people feel that government should ban smoking entirely. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been known that there is
huge correlation
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a huge correlation
of smoking to lung cancer and most
cardio-pulmonary
of or pertaining to or affecting both the heart and the lungs and their functions
cardiopulmonary
diseases in the human body. The nicotine and tar, among which are the main hazardous components of each cigarette
sticks
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stick
, that one can get when the fumes are inhaled, are the ones responsible for the harmful effects, as these are toxic to the body. Even if these facts are made aware
to
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of
the public with all the health-related advertisements and gentle reminders, people still have the choice to continue smoking, given that these products are just readily available for purchase in most retail stores.
Moreover
, in the scope of environmental issues, the people are made aware of the damages inflicted by the tobacco industry go far beyond the effects of the smokes that cigarettes put into the air as when they are inhaled in the body. The industry itself and the production of them, accounts for the deforestation, climate change, cigarette butt litters and wildfires, which all have
damaging impact
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a damaging impact
to
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of
nature. They create environment hazards beginning
from
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of
the use of pesticides, fertilizers, toxic chemicals that depletes the soil of its nutrients. Added to the list is that tobacco cultivation and farming balded our forests leading
to hotter climate
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to a hotter climate
or global warming. The trash created by cigarette butts is
also
destroying our oceans and poisoning our marine animals. In conclusion, a day would not be enough to discuss why smoking should be banned entirely. And it is just right when sometimes, the government will put the reins in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own hands and induce measures in putting a stop to smoking by banning it entirely.
This
way, mortality rates from smoking-related illnesses will be significantly reduced and the environments will be much more conducive and healthier place for all
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
inhabitants
to live
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live
in as well as for the
next
generation of
human race
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the human race
to come.

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