You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Dear Tom, I am writing to express my interest in conducting a
presentation
for our
development
team
at work on the best practices of Android
development
. As you are aware that I attended a conference at Google's headquarters
last
week on Android and I would like to replicate something similar for our
team
. I would be interested in giving a
PowerPoint based
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presentation
to the
team
that would cover the topics impacting
development
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the development
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team
's everyday challenges and the respective solutions.
This
session would
last
for an hour and would be followed by a quiz covering some questions based on the
presentation
, and that would
last
for another 30 minutes. In my opinion,
entire
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development
team
along with the managers should attend
this
session, and so it would be best if we can conduct
this
in the training room of our office itself. Would you please approve
this
presentation
for our
team
so that I can pass on the knowledge and the best practices to the
team
and we all can grow together? Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Tushar
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