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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is?

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Art
 is considered as an essential part of the culture throughout the world, but now a day’s fewer and fewer people appreciate
art
 and their focus is turned onto science and technology. In
this
 essay let us analyse the reason why peoples attention turned away from
art
 sector and
also
 suggest possible
way
 to boost their interest in
art
. While it’s true that
art
 enriches the culture, it does not play any role in improving the lives of people.
For example
,
Accept space
,
one does not have to marvel at an exuberant piece of
art
 to live comfortably. But when comes to technology, people cannot live without electricity or computers. Now a day’s technological advancement as moved
way
 ahead that people do online shopping even for basic vegetable shopping. So the fact is science and technology gives job opportunity and
hence
 people are interested in pursuing it. In order to boost the
art
 sector, the
government
 should provide job opportunity for youngsters, in older days during the monarchical rule, a beautiful piece of
art
 will be appreciated by expensive gift and many titles, so in older days
art
 flourished, now the
government
 has stopped giving incentives for good
art
. So to boost and make people pursue
art
,
government
 should conduct many exhibitions and encourage younger people who like
art
 to participate in
this
 competition
.
Accept space
.
Government
 should
also
 open museums and by
this
way
 job opportunity can be boosted. The most effective
way
 to nurture
art
 is to capitalize on its economic potential. The
government
 can do
this
 by creating jobs in
this
 sector.
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