The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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amount
thousands
of Britain student
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students
further
education that based on gender andCorrect article usage
the
kinds
of Fix the agreement mistake
kind
fulltime
or Correct your spelling
full-time
part
-time
studying between in
1970 and 1990.
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amount
of part
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part-time
time
student
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students
significantly
bigger than full Add a missing verb
is significantly
time
. The trend of female student
increased either in Fix the agreement mistake
students
full
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full-time
time
or part
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part-time
time
education, so on full
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full-time
time
male student
, Fix the agreement mistake
students
while
amount
of Add an article
the amount
part
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part-time
time
student
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students
fluctuatively
and Correct your spelling
lucratively
trend
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the trend
to decrease
from the first Change the verb form
decreased
period
.
The highest amount
of part
-time
male student
happened in Fix the agreement mistake
students
a
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the
period
1970/1971 around 1000 thousands
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thousand
while
female student
happened in Fix the agreement mistake
students
a
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the
period
1990/1991 around 1100 thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
On the other hand
, the highest full-
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number of full-time
time
student
reached above 200 thousands
in Change to singular
thousand
a
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the
period
1990/1991 either in
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apply
male
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males
female
. Around 150 Fix the agreement mistake
females
thousands
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thousand
part
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part-time
time
male student
downward in Fix the agreement mistake
students
second
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the second
period
and upward again in third
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the third
period
.
In Britain, part
-time
had much
students than Correct quantifier usage
more
full
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full-time
time
education and there was the
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a
rise
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rising
amount
of female student
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students
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