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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree on disagree?

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Crime
 is a perceived as a threat to the development of any country and its citizens. As long as a prison punishment is prevalent, people will feel safe and secured. It is disagreed that education and job training should be used
instead
 of it. Analysing the seriousness of a trail which is indirectly proportional to its repetition in the future & fear of conducting a
crime
 will prove
this
. The
first
 reason is the severity of a punishment that gets inscribed in the mind of a criminal.
Although
, loss of valuable time and exclusion from loved ones may be daunting to some
however
, it is a price that they have to pay.
For instance
 the monotonous tasks at a cell might be frustrating and may put someone into a reflection of his/her deeds.
Thus
, these sentences are fair since it is in tandem to the
crime
 committed. Another plausible explanation is that the fear that comes before committing
such
 a gory act. Would anyone be fearful if the penance is not stern
?
Accept space
?
 If it is not draconian the suspect can engage into any hideous
crime
. To highlight, if multiple years of sentence are not granted to
they
objective case of they
them
 who commit horrendous acts of rape, it will be a repetitive action.
Therefore
, a simple educational assignment or skill training will not at all be sufficient to curb
crime
 from a city. In conclusion, though human rights activists in the past have been rebellious on the theme of making someone suffer, lately owing to the growth in
crime
, abiding to the thought
became
Suggestion
had become
 necessary. The severity of punishment and the worry of the repercussion is surely a reason why I strongly believe that education and job trainings are not tangential to providing a jail sentence.
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