Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It has been observed that young people in our society suffer more stress than in
last generations
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the last generations
, as they live in the world of technology and advancement. People
think
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will think
to survive in today's world, they should aware of modern technology. A recent research has been conducted the student of University of Melbourne and concluded that it is a matter of thought that 75% youngsters are facing multiple stress
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Few
causes
an occurrence of something
cases
of depression are social behaviour, competition, complexion and so forth. I strongly believe that young people live a stressful life. One of the
reason
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reasons
is study pressure from parents and job coercion from family.
For example
, Parents force their children to study professional field without knowing their subject of interest. It is getting trendy that a person who has professional degree would be more successful rather than who does not have. And parents too have the same thinking. But it is not true, many non professional degree holders are successful, wealthy and respectable in
community
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the community
. Parents must need to change their mindset. Parents
must focused
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must focus
on the upbringing of children rather than make them money and brand conscious. Other major issues is the society difference. The world is rapidly divided into two classes that are upper and lower classes.
This
differs trigger those
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,
who belong to low income scale and it develops a complexity in character.
For instance
, a youngster who earns less and does not have a lavish lifestyle who definitely lose their confidence.
and
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And
would like to accomplish all these things without
identify
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identifying
the difference between the right and wrong. As a consequence, crime rate raised. One of the vital role play our social media. About every media host trying to change the individual's mind slowly and gradually that high living standard, technology and money are the basic needs to live while moral values, helping humanity and respect are the key factors to live a healthy existence In the
last
, I conclude that to overcome anxiety and stress, we need to council our young generation and make sure them that a healthy and successful does require materialistic things. If we don't do so we soon lose our generation and our youth.
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