As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

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Many countries are facing a

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of economic development, which is a positive movement, but it comes at the cost of increasing nuclear families.

This

essay will enlighten the reasons for

this

phenomenon and explain how

this

trend is affecting our society. Developed countries, as well as developing countries, throw numerous opportunities for almost every section of the community, thereby attracting people to leave their closed ones and live on their own.

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, take for an example of mega-construction companies, which are responsible for building huge infrastructure,

therefore

demanding the human workforce to accomplish these projects.

As a result

, joint families living in the countryside find these

opportunities lucrative

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opportunities, lucrative

and

consequently

, leave their closed ones.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

115 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some feel that government shoul prioritize healthcare instead of other importand areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?