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You receive this email from your English pen friend, Matt. Write to Matt and tell him what you will do to improve your English in this new school year.

#email #english #pen #friend #matt #school #year
Hi Matt, Good to see your email. As per plan, I will start
look
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to look
looking
 at improving my English by practicing writing small
sentances
a string of words satisfying the grammatical rules of a language
sentences
 and framing words with
right content
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the right content
. I have to speak with people around me in
english language even
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the English language, even
the English language even
English language even
 if they are from
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 and they can understand
local language
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the local language
. I am planning to buy some books related to British and American English literature to look at difficult words and its meaning in local language. So, I need to go for
tutan
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
 if even after I will give a try with all the other options we have.
Finally
, I will check
onlne
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
vidoes
the visible part of a television transmission
videos
 in social media and
also
in
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on
youtube
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YouTube
 to get to knowledge about speaking flow. Thanks, Siva K.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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