Write about professional entertainers (musicians, actors, performers, dancers, and other stars) and athletes and their income. Do you think those people are paid too much? Get your arguments.
Nowadays, there are many professional entertainers
such
as actors, musicians,... who
become celebrities and have a large amount of Suggestion
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salary which
they are paid. Some people disagree that those entertainers just need a few efforts and get more than everyone would wish for. Accept comma addition
salary, which
However
, in my opinion, all the entertainers probably have to pass a lot of difficulty in their childhood witht
their talent, motivationexpresses the means used
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,
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,
work
to
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for
success
and become famous in these day
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days
Therefore
, I agree that professional entertainers should get a high income
which worth their perseverance.
Firstly
, their
are many entertainers in in or at that place
there
mordern
days because they want belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
high salary
and light Suggestion
higher salaries
higher salary
a higher salary
work
, but that's not that easy. Despite the large amount of people trying to become celebrities, there's only a few of them who success
thanks to their perseverance and hard work
during a long time without discouraged. That's also
proved that the professional entertainers should get a big income
due to their motivation of not giving up. Secondly
, many people look from the outside and think that the "stars" just do a light work but
get everything, throughout what I have Accept comma addition
work, but
experience
and see, I totally disagree. In fact, the celebrities not only need hard Suggestion
experienced
work
and talent to success but
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success, but
also
be very tired because of many annoying things
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the many annoying things
for example
: there fans' harassment; their rigid schedule and so on. As we can see, professional entertainers have work
really hard to get their big achievements. Suggestion
worked
Finally
, the "stars" nowadays have great talent who can do just a single work but
they are very good at it, that's why they get a high Accept comma addition
work, but
income
because of their viewers, fans and it's all their effort.
In conclusion, professional entertainers have to work
very hard and need a long tireless effort to success
and get a high salary which they have always want
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wanted
Therefore
, I agree that celebrities should get a high income
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion