Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Advertising sector has emerged with new improved digital ways to source customers. Even consumers cannot ignore the digital adverts in various mediums they use

oneveryday basis

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on an everyday basis

on everyday basis

. It is agreed that advertising encourages wasteful purchase that are actually not needed by

prospects

a formal written offer to sell securities (filed with the SEC) that sets forth a plan for a (proposed) business enterprise

prospectus

. Analysing the emergent models of sourcing with adaptive interests of customers and appealing celebrity endorsements will prove

this

. There are many reasons why it

propells

cause to move forward with force

propels

people to buy

unecessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

products.

Firstly

, with the adaptive nature of search

engines they

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engines, they

gather information of the pages and articles that the buyer browses through. A plausible explanation can be the social media portals which match the interests on common topics wherein the seller can collect information

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about

these users.

For instance

, watching videos related to cars can bring pop-ups

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products on the screen of the person hovering across the site.

Thus

, the

viewership

of the advert originally for entertainment leads to a sale. Another reason why

this

is prevalent is due to interesting

creatives

having the ability or power to create

creative

involving famous personalities. Why would you not buy a watch promoted by Tom Cruise?

Since

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people who are popular are followed and adored by

fans they

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fans, they

blindly purchase the item. Only if celebrities actually used the items which they promote would they know the holistic benefits and not by taking fees for it.

For instance

, a beautiful actress promoting a beauty kit acts as if it is the only reason for her wonderful skin.

Therefore

, personality and fan following affects the buying patterns. In conclusion advertising encourages selling of things that the individual has not even inquired & owing to capture of advanced sourcing models in the internet and due to mindlessly taking advice from television or hoardings with their idols

this

takes place.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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artificial needs
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

people think that the government should provide assistance to all kind of artists, including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this a waste of money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

Some people think secondary school students and high school students should be allowed to choose academic courses leading to university or practical courses leading to careers such as carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree？