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Advertisements are the most important marketing strategy to enhance the sale of products? do you agree or disagree?

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Advertising is a mode used to multiply the sale of a product. Different modes and mediums are used to convey the message among the masses. An advertisement is of two types: electronic and print. Both are very important, but electronic is very popular and effective because it has
very strong audio-visual impact
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a very strong audio-visual impact
, and even role models are used to convey the message I agree with the statement that advertising is an important marketing strategy, because the main motive is to create desire, which leads to demand and generates enough supply to give profits to the organisation. No doubt, the burden of advertisements is shifted to the consumers, but the company makes a brand and enjoys the profit Expanding the statement, advertisements are becoming a mandatory part of sales. Earlier
,
Accept space
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 people were happy with the local brands
,
Accept space
,
 whereas
noadays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 the market is flooded with internationally branded products. The competition is on
global level
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a global level
 and it is very tough to compete in the market, so it is not practically possible to survive in the business world without
advertisement
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advertising
. To recapitulate, advertising is
big industry
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a big industry
 that deals with the promotion of products. Social media
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has
 created a complete revolution in making choices for the consumer.
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But
 apart from being a great
market
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marketing
 strategy, it is equally important to keep a check on the misleading advertisements in order to protect the interests of the consumers. The advertisements should not exaggerate the capability of the product or the performance of the product.
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