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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In these years, there is a growing recognition that English is well on its way to becoming dominant global
language
. The impact of
this
 trend is a subject of intense debate. It is my opinion that the advantages of a global
language
 will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. The rise of a global
language
 is a facilitator of cross-cultural
communication
 and the
communication
 between people with different
language
 backgrounds. In
different area
Suggestion
a different area
different areas
 of global
communication
such
 as science and news, recognising a common
language
 removes
communication
 barriers and increase convenience. On many formal occasions, English is used as a working
language
, boosts efficiency and avoids misunderstanding.
Likewise
, exchange of essential information will be prompted. One might argue that the rise of a global
language
 endangers other
language
, in a belief that people would turn to English as their
first
language
.
This
 viewpoint is flawed because the widespread of English has nothing to do with non-English-speakers's
language
 proficiency. People are motivated to learn
English but
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English, but
 do not necessarily drop their native
language
.
Therefore
, the dominance of English is not a cause of the loss of
language
 diversity. As international media recognises English as its main
language
, most of the broadcasted information
is related
Suggestion
relates
 to the lifestyle of the English-spoken countries. It might put the minority cultures on the verge of extinction when the ethnic people adopt Western culture. The effect of shrinking cultural diversity is destructive, causing people to live in a monotonous world. The development of English is overall a positive global trend. It connects people who speak different languages and enables them to exchange ideas,
although
 it can lead to a loss of cultural diversity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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