You work at home and have a problem with a place of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, -- Describe the problem with the equipment, -- Explain how this problem is affecting, your work, -- Say what you want the shop or company to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your dissatisfied customers, after purchasing a laptop in the
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month, from your store. Actually, at the time of purchase, your staff promised me to deliver a good product and they would provide the home service
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if there would be anything wrong with the item. So. I purchased a laptop for my working purpose. But, it started showing me a black screen, just after a week of purchase. When I called
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your store, you did not pick up my call. Today, it has been around ten days
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submitting my complaint, but I have not received any valuable service yet. As
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I am a full-time employee, I have to work for eight hours a day and because of your terrible laptop, my work has been hampered for the
last
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couple of weeks. Now, I really feel tired to call you every time. So, I just want to return
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product and get my refund as soon as possible. I hope, you understand my problem and transfer my money back to my account at the earliest,
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, I will need to seek out the help of the National Consumer Centre. Yours faithfully, Jenny Taylor

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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