Nowadays, television is an integral part of almost every house, and people of all age groups used to watch various programms on daily basis.

Nowadays,
television
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is an integral part of almost every house, and people of all age groups used to watch various
programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
on
daily basis
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a daily basis
.
Altough
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Although
television
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is an important source of information, due to frequent screening of barbaric and savage
content
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, it is damaging children's
behaviour
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. Children develop their behavioural traits according to their
bservation
the act of making and recording a measurement
observation
, and
this
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is why, negative
television
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content
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can
severly
to a severe or serious degree
severely
damage their way of conduct. Normally, children try to follow what they are watching and observing,
similarly
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, they can
also
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follow the violent acts which they are watching on
television
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. There
are
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is
a plethora of
television
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programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
which involve killing and brutal fighting scenes, and after watching that, children try to follow those acts.
For instance
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, during a casual fight between two siblings, an eight
year's
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year
boy hit his younger brother with a stone and broke his skull, and
this
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case was reported by an independent journalist based in London.
Such
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type of incidents are
occuring
come to pass
occurring
more
frequestly
many times at short intervals
frequently
these days,
and
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And
the main culprit behind them is watching violent
content
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, because if a child is performing a brutal act
then
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there
are
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Are
maximum chances that they had watched something like that on
television
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.
Furthermore
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, there are plenty of
television
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shows which
involves
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involve
crimes, suicide bombings and lethal accidents, and by watching
such
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type of
content
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children may become anxious. According to a survey, an
Amarican
of or relating to the United States of America or its people or language or culture
American
child watch
television
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three to four hours daily, which means that children are more exposed to violent
content
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. Worse, children start considering world as
a
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an
unsafe place which is
severly
to a severe or serious degree
severely
affecting their
behaviour
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and lifestyle.
Moreover
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, due to apprehensive
behaviour
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.
children
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Children
try to refrain themselves from healthy activities like outdoor sports and school trips, which may lead them towards
loneloness
the state of being alone in solitary isolation
loneliness
and depression.
Nonetheless
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,
television
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is a vital source of information and
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
due to display of violent
programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
, it is
negatively
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Negatively
influencing the
behaviour
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of children, and
this
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is why, parents must keep a
regural
in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle
regular
check on the
content
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their children are watching.

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